Saturday, 15 November 2014
Love the Paris way
Hi I'm Paris and I'm a part of the Capulet family and in really good terms with lord Capulet he cares about me so much that he wants me to become his son-in-law and marry his beautiful daughter Juliet. It's very exciting to hear that I get to marry such a young and beautiful girl and soon have infants with her. I am trying to convince lord Capulet for the marriage to happen soon because as I have said "Younger than she are happy mothers made" which in my terms means she's young right now and can become a young responsible wife and mother as one of the girls about the age of 12 In our society are already having infants so the younger the better. Also it's really hard to have love with Capulet family because they have had a rivalry with the montagues for a really long time as I have said "of honourable reckoning are you both. And pity tis you have lived at odds so long. But now, my lord,what say you to my suit?"which means the two families have grat honour in their and it's very heartbreaking to know the two have been in rivalry so long. It would affect my business if they hit back together so I have stopped trying to bring the love back together but to avoid more disturbances in our society they should quit this fighting. I would also like to address that I'm so excited to marry the beautiful and young Juliet it will bring up my respect and bussiness in society, so I mean if somebody tries to break our alliance than understand their physical features will not be looking so handsome anymore but I won't have to really worry about occurring because normal people living in our society will not even try to get close and the Montagues dont even come close to the capulets so anybody wouldn't even dare. Well I have to win Juliet's heart and then she will be mines for ever. We'll love for me all bussiness if you score a new young and beautiful deal like I got Juliet than what's so bad about that right? I mean I can love her and love our future children even more well I love the capulet family like my own.
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This is good, I like how much detail you put into this character's thoughts but I felt that you should talk more about what Paris felt about love and how he feels for Juliet!
ReplyDeleteYou missed some minor punctuation mistakes. Fix that and add some details on his feelings for Juliet and this will be on point. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I really like how you explain a bit about him, its weird that an older man would want to marry such a young girl.
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job of portraying Paris's feelings about how he wants to marry someone young and have children early. You also included your thoughts on the Capulet/Montague rivalry which was important so good job!
ReplyDeleteThis post was really good, but maybe add more commas and try not use "and" as often. By fixing these minor problem your post can become even better than it is.
ReplyDeletei dont think paris is part of the capulat family
ReplyDeleteThe awkward business feel of this is actually sort of good for Paris. :) Punctuation fixes are fairly easy and you can ask others to help you see them. The one thing I would talk more about is the part where you said you can learn to love Juliet. What benefits are there to Paris in getting a wealthy attractive young wife? How might this benefit him? What does he mean by learn to love? What would he feel for her at the beginning? What kind of "love" can you learn? Are there any other characters that you think this relates to? That are similar?
ReplyDeleteI like how you describes how Paris actually feels about Juliet and how he mostly wants build his respect and businesses in society
ReplyDeleteI like your describes of how Paris think about Juliet.
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